Recipe for a poem
April 12th, 2010 § Leave a Comment
”However it begins, it’s gotta be loud
and then it’s gotta get a little bit louder.
Because this is how you write a political poem
and how you deliver it with power.
Mix current events with platitudes of empowerment.
Wrap up in rhyme or rhyme it up in rap until it sounds true.
Glare until it sinks in.”
How to write a political poem
by Taylor Malik
Recipe for a poem
You need:
A subject you care about
Paper
Pen
Dictionary
Start with writing one line. This is your “hook”. For example I’ll start my poem with ”I never saw that”. This line we will reuse several times in our poem.
Skip one line and then write an explanation that takes about four lines.
My example goes:
”I never saw that…
That thing you claimed
you saw
with all its glory
Maybe it was hidden from me”
Next, we put in that first line again, to make our reader or audience get a feel for the poem. Make them feel the rhythm. Make them listen.
This part can be any length, but preferably more than 8 lines, so go into a bit more detail!
My example continues:
“I never saw that
and I don’t believe in hiding things
I don’t believe that was it
….” and so on..
When we have finished this part, we use a variation of our first line again, in my case:
“I can’t see it”
or something similar. At this point the “that” in my poem has been a bit more explained. The reader or audience has an idea about what I talk about, so now it’s time to wrap it up neatly.
Start with your “I can’t see it” and add on the next line “because.. “, and explain to your listener. Let it take about four lines.
Now, you have almost finished, all you need is a punch line. In my case it will be
“because there is no silver lining”
All in all my example would be something like:
“
I never saw that…
That thing you claimed
you saw
with all its glory
Maybe it was hidden from me
I never saw that
and I don’t believe in hiding things
I don’t believe that was it
I don’t believe in the words
so filled with nothing more
than letters filling space
hanging out in corners
waiting for better things to do
better words to attach themselves to
your words
that there is always a silver lining
I can’t see it
because
that world is dead
that one right there
where haiti falls into pieces and the preachers reach for guns
and guns reach out and touch the hearts of bankers
and there is nothing left but falling
apart
because there is no silver lining.
“
Now, it’s your turn!